{"id":1201,"date":"2013-04-12T22:19:34","date_gmt":"2013-04-13T05:19:34","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/?p=1201"},"modified":"2015-04-18T06:52:16","modified_gmt":"2015-04-18T13:52:16","slug":"dialogue-and-a-tanka","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/?p=1201","title":{"rendered":"Dialogue and a tanka"},"content":{"rendered":"<span class=\"fb_share\"><fb:like href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/?p=1201\" layout=\"button_count\"><\/fb:like><\/span><p>Merleau-Ponty (1993) wrote, &#8220;For the speaker no less than for the listener, language is definitely something other than a technique for ciphering or deciphering ready-made significations&#8221; (p. 80). He is ever insistent that being-in-the-world is an embodied event, an ongoing discovery, and he relentlessly examines the ways in which experiences are given to us, prior to our labored formulations about them. \u00a0This careful seeing yields jewels of description, for example:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Green-maple-leaves.jpg\" rel='prettyPhoto[gallery1]'><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-1242\" src=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Green-maple-leaves-150x150.jpg\" alt=\"Green maple leaves\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Green-maple-leaves-150x150.jpg 150w, https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Green-maple-leaves-85x85.jpg 85w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/><\/a>&#8220;Language is much more like a sort of being than a means, and that is why it can present something to us so well. A friend&#8217;s speech over the telephone brings us the friend himself, as if he were wholly present in that manner of calling and saying goodbye to us, of beginning and ending his\u00a0sentences, and of carrying on the conversation through things left unsaid&#8221; (p. 80).<\/p>\n<p>In so few words Merleau-Ponty evokes the experience of the other&#8217;s unique presence with us, through speech.<\/p>\n<p>But what is speech? The presence of the other for us is far more than significations, data, ideas, or &#8220;information.&#8221; When a friend speaks to me, if I&#8217;m present&#8211;rather than preoccupied or distracted!&#8211;the other\u00a0<em>person\u00a0<\/em>is with me. Any conversation deserving of the name is a being-together. In it is the constitution of what Husserl names the &#8220;we-world&#8221; (<em>Wir-Welt<\/em>).<\/p>\n<p>When speaking to far-away colleagues and friends, more often than a telephone I use Skype or Google+. Through these media we have not only the friend&#8217;s speech, but a wide range of his or her gestures, tones, a fraction of his home, a piece of her wall, a painting, a window, the light in another country, another time of day.<\/p>\n<p>Is it simulated proximity? Or am I really invited into my friend&#8217;s home, his office, his kitchen? A neuroscientist might interestingly inquire into the measurably embodied traces of this experience&#8211;the ways in which I respond, mostly nonverbally, to the other&#8217;s presence, how my presence in the here-and-now is in dialogue with his or hers, and how this occurs for both of us, mutually, even reciprocally.<\/p>\n<p>As a phenomenologist, it is enough to live these changes attentively, awake to the remarkable phenomenon of the momentary next-door-ness of Tokyo or Rome or Mexico City or Lund. Not only space and time but language is being bridged, somehow, and the everydayness of two world merges in a way that makes the world outside my door feel surprisingly distant&#8211;by way of contrast&#8211;when I step out of my home. Tokyo was closer to me than Oakland, for the past hour.<\/p>\n<p>So much of poststructuralist thought seems committed to emphasizing ruptures, gaps, discontinuities, incommensurabilities of all kinds&#8211;and of course we all experience such lapses, but arguably when they command our attention it is as foreground over and against a background of lived-continuities\u00a0that is the taken for granted fabric of human being-together, however imperfectly lived.<\/p>\n<p>In the aftermath of dialoguing with far-away friends, as a phenomenologist, my curiosity awakens&#8211;like a virus, almost <a href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Pic-AkihiroYoshida-20130601a.png\" rel='prettyPhoto[gallery1]'><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-1582\" src=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Pic-AkihiroYoshida-20130601a.png\" alt=\"Pic-AkihiroYoshida-20130601a\" width=\"135\" height=\"183\" \/><\/a>autonomously!&#8212;and seeks, as if of its own accord, to unfold and examine what I&#8217;ve lived, to reflectively open up the<span style=\"font-size: 13px; line-height: 19px;\">\u00a0implicit meanings that fill me&#8211;not solipsistically, but out of a conviction that there&#8217;s something in the lived-experience, calling to be shared with my fellows.<br \/>\n<\/span><\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been meeting regularly over Skype with Dr. Yoshida Akihiro for some time&#8211;he lives near Tokyo, I live near San Francisco&#8211;we share stories and thoughts, as fellow travelers in phenomenological philosophy and psychology.<\/p>\n<p>With him I had the experience, as I&#8217;ve had \u00a0many times before with friends in the US, Europe, Latin America and Asia&#8211;that phenomenologists are few and far between! Dialoguing with a classically-trained Japanese scholar evoked, without my fully realizing it, some poems I read years ago of <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Ry%C5%8Dkan\">Taigu Ry\u00f4kan<\/a>, a 19th century Soto Zen monk whose poetry described his rural, mendicant life in a poor hut. Here is an example translated by Smith and Huang (2009):<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 120px;\"><strong>Reply to a Friend<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 120px;\"><span style=\"font-size: 13px; line-height: 19px;\">In stubborn stupidity, I live on alone<br \/>\nbefriended by trees and herbs.<br \/>\nToo lazy to learn right from wrong,<br \/>\nI laugh at myself, ignoring others.<br \/>\nLifting my bony shanks, I cross the stream,<br \/>\na sack in my hand, blessed by spring weather.<br \/>\nLiving thus, I want for nothing,<br \/>\nat peace with all the world.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 120px;\">Your finger points to the moon,<br \/>\nbut the finger is blind until the moon appears.<br \/>\nWhat connection has moon and finger?<br \/>\nAre they separate objects or bound?<br \/>\nThis is a question for beginners<br \/>\nwrapped in seas of ignorance.<br \/>\nYet one who looks beyond metaphor<br \/>\nknows there is no finger; there is no moon.<\/p>\n<p>It might surprise those who regard Ry\u00f4kan as a &#8220;hermit&#8221; that he directs his poem toward a friend. But of course intersubjectivity is immediately present in the poetic act, which is a reaching out to others. Half-remembering the images from\u00a0Ry\u00f4kan, I mentioned to Yoshida-san that we phenomenologists are often solitary as well&#8211;oftentimes our peers and friends in phenomenology are far away! So, I joked, maybe we are each a little like a monk, living isolated in a poor hut in the mountains, and when we see the traces of the fire of some other monk, even if he is far away, we feel cheered up! The signs of the other&#8217;s fire breaks our solitude.<\/p>\n<p>Yoshida-san seemed to find this comparison not only apt, but hilarious: for me, this was a good confirmation.<\/p>\n<p>He had shared with me that for some time he has been composing poems in the\u00a0<em><a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Tanka\">tanka<\/a><\/em> style&#8211;a poetic form that originated in 8th century Japan. Naturally as phenomenologists we could not bear to simply name something like the <em>tanka:<\/em>\u00a0we needed to reflect upon its <em>form<\/em>&#8211;to inquire playfully into the eidos of the <em>tanka<\/em>&#8211;and we arrived at the idea that such poems, which are quite short, aim to express as succinctly and purely as possible what Husserl might call <em>a single intuition<\/em>. The <em>tanka<\/em>\u00a0is an aesthetic expression of the arising of that intuition. And I appreciated the free spirit with which Yoshida-san was writing, not to please an audience, but to find out, as if by accident, what insights emerge through this spontaneous expression through <em>tanka<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>So I was surprised when Yoshida-san emailed me this\u00a0<em>tanka<\/em>:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Screen-shot-2013-04-12-at-2.17.58-PM.png\" rel='prettyPhoto[gallery1]'><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1257\" src=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Screen-shot-2013-04-12-at-2.17.58-PM-300x156.png\" alt=\"Tanka\" width=\"300\" height=\"156\" srcset=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Screen-shot-2013-04-12-at-2.17.58-PM-300x156.png 300w, https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Screen-shot-2013-04-12-at-2.17.58-PM.png 635w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Phonetically it reads:\u00a0<em>Kokohnaru genshougakusha sanchouni ranpu kakagete kokoro kayowasu.\u00a0<\/em>His English translation is:<\/p>\n<p><em>Phenomenologist<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Stands noble-mindedly on his own mountain-summit alone<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Yearning to have sincere and honest dialogues<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Choosing to hold up his lamp high above<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>His heart enlightens like-minded friends on far-away summits<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Even now and ever into the future<\/em><a href=\"#_msocom_1\"><br \/>\n<\/a><\/p>\n<div>\n<p>So the image that I shared with him&#8211;inspired by my memories of Ry\u00f4kan&#8211;came back to me, in a Japanese form. And actually, as we discussed the poem, it went through several revisions and reshapings, arriving finally at the forms we&#8217;ve included here.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>Dialogue is most real, I&#8217;d say, when one shares\u00a0oneself\u00a0with the other person sincerely, and the response one receives is surprising, because it opens up a new horizon for both people. Suddenly we are sitting very close together, despite the distance, and sharing something. And in fact we were both sitting: only one of us was in suburban Tokyo and one in the Bay Area. Both of us were \u00a0in our own homes, and at the same time we were at home together. We are what Husserl called\u00a0\u201chomecomrades\u201d (<em>Heimgenosse<\/em>).<\/p>\n<p>In the literature of premodern mysticism, it is not uncommon to read stories of adepts who reported experiencing the intimate presence of their fellows despite vast geographic distances.\u00a0Our own ordinary but nonetheless rich experiences of connection over distance deserve attention, as full of the minor details and accidents of daily life as they are.<\/p>\n<p>Merleau-Ponty writes:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">&#8220;True speech&#8230;speech which signifies, which finally renders &#8220;l&#8217;absente de tous bouquets&#8221; present and frees the meaning captive in the thing&#8211;is only silence in respect to empirical usage, for it does not go so far as to become a common noun. Language is oblique and autonomous, and if it sometimes\u00a0signifies\u00a0a thought or a thing directly, that is only a secondary power derived from its inner life. Like the weaver, the writer works on the wrong side of his material. He has to do only with language, and it is thus that he suddenly finds himself surrounded by meaning&#8221; (p. 82).<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0Isn&#8217;t what is true of speech generally, also true of our conversations? We talk, we reach out intentionally to our friends: and then sometimes, our words give birth to a meaning that then begins to move <em>us<\/em>. Freed from our strenuous efforts to signify something preconceived, our only task is to unfold a meaning that&#8217;s already emerging, present to both of us, in a world we&#8217;ve found together&#8211;despite our distance.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">\u00a0***<\/p>\n<p><strong>Hermeneutic postscript<\/strong>: In our discussions about this post, Yoshida-san and I found that the\u00a0<em>tanka\u00a0<\/em>itself kept changing; I would play with the English translation, and Dr. Yoshida would respond with a revised Japanese version. The humble campfire morphed into a burning brand in Japanese, then a signal fire, and finally a lantern. This back and forth was its own conversation, and something interesting stood out: the tone of Yoshida-san&#8217;s first English version was imperative, a call to the phenomenologist. Working with this feeling-sense, I produced this draft, with him:<\/p>\n<div>\n<p><em>Take your stand, phenomenologist!<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>High on the mountain, alone, tending your fire.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Encourage yourself and many far-away friends<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Now and into the future, then\u2026&#8230;<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Maple-leaves.jpg\" rel='prettyPhoto[gallery1]'><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-1236\" src=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Maple-leaves-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"Maple leaves\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Maple-leaves-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/04\/Maple-leaves.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>However, upon reflection, Yoshida-san felt that althought the original sense of his poem was indeed imperative, it placed a forceful demand. He felt that a different voice was more true to the\u00a0<em>tanka\u00a0<\/em>form: namely, a more peaceful attitude in which the subject of the poem, the phenomenologist, is being purely witnessed in what he (or she) is already doing. The final Japanese version reflects this sensibility.<\/p>\n<p>In our discussions and multiple revisions, he proposed that &#8220;The difference between the English poem by you and the Japanese <em>tanka<\/em> by me should remain, rather than [be] vanished, and certainly be appreciated, from the phenomenological appreciation of the perspective differences of individuals situated in the different life-worlds.&#8221; I agree, and in that spirit I have included variations.<\/p>\n<p>Lest the reader think that this is a simple case of two strictly separate and absolutely different life-worlds, I would suggest that Dr. Yoshida&#8217;s perspective is too complex to be reduced to a simple dichotomy: reading his essay\u00a0<em><a href=\"http:\/\/www.cirp.uqam.ca\/documents%20pdf\/Collection%20vol.%201\/14.Yoshida.pdf\" target=\"_blank\">On Tamamushi-iro Expression: A Phenomenological Explication of Tamamushi-iro-no (Intentionally Ambiguous) Expressive\u00a0Acts<\/a>,\u00a0<\/em>you will see how he describes his experience of living through \u00a0and reflecting upon various culturally-conditioned expressive attitudes when he moved from Japan to the US, for graduate studies, and then returned to Japan. The ongoing dynamism of his point-of-view is evident.<\/p>\n<p>I cannot help but include Yoshida-san&#8217;s explanation of his <em>nom de plume<\/em>,\u00a0<b>\u6c42\u9053\u611a\u7ae5 ,<\/b> which he translates as\u00a0\u201ca stupid\/na\u00efve child seeking after truth.&#8221;\u00a0It is found in the lower right-hand corner above, below the <em>tanka.\u00a0<\/em>His commentary upon the four kanjis comprising this pen name is:<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;\u6c42 Seeking \u2013\u9053 Michi (\u9053(way)\uff1d\u201ddo\u201d\u2252truth) \u611a stupid\/na\u00efve, which implies sometimes far better than \u201cclever\u201d, \u201dshrewd\u201d or even \u201cintelligent\u201d. \u611a is sometimes and by some people more valued\/appreciated than \u201ccleverness\u201d and very near to \u201cwise\u201d and \u201cwisdom\u201d. So, \u5927\u611a is regarded as an ideal way of life sometimes and by some people. \u7ae5 child, young child, but it is used to be applied even to old people, in the view of life that a man returns to a child when he gets very old. It is a symbol of his humbleness and at the same times his assertion that he has overcome the clever vulgarity of the adult social world. It is apt for an old retired person. So, \u6c42\u9053\u611a\u7ae5 is my pen-name.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>References<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Merleau-Ponty, M. (1993).\u00a0<em>The Merleau-Ponty aesthetics reader: Philosophy and painting\u00a0<\/em>(G. A. Johnson and M. B. Smith, Trans. Eds.). Evanston: Northwestern University Press.<\/p>\n<p>Ry\u00f4kan, T. (2009). <em>The Kanshi poems of Taigu Ry\u00f4kan<\/em> (L. Smith and M.H. L. Huang, Trans.). Huron, OH: Bottom Dog Press.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Photos<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Green maple leaves photo credit: <a href=\"http:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/tomooka\/22532111\/\">tomooka<\/a> via <a href=\"http:\/\/photopin.com\">photopin<\/a> <a href=\"http:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-sa\/2.0\/\">cc<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Personal photo courtesy of Yoshida Akihiro<\/p>\n<p>Red maple leaves photo credit: <a href=\"http:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/wwarby\/5131627204\/\">wwarby<\/a> via <a href=\"http:\/\/photopin.com\">photopin<\/a> <a href=\"http:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/2.0\/\">cc<\/a><\/p>\n<span class=\"fb_share\"><fb:like href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/?p=1201\" layout=\"button_count\"><\/fb:like><\/span>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Merleau-Ponty (1993) wrote, &#8220;For the speaker no less than for the listener, language is definitely something other than a technique for ciphering or deciphering ready-made significations&#8221; (p. 80). He is ever insistent that being-in-the-world is an embodied event, an ongoing discovery, and he relentlessly examines the ways in which experiences are given to us, prior<br \/><span class=\"excerpt_more\"><br \/><a href=\"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/?p=1201\">[continue reading&#8230;]<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":1275,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[12],"tags":[35,18,29,25,54,32,40],"class_list":["post-1201","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-feature","tag-applebaum","tag-cultural-psychology","tag-hermeneutics","tag-intersubjectivity","tag-merleau-ponty","tag-technology","tag-yoshida"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1201","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1201"}],"version-history":[{"count":70,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1201\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1583,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1201\/revisions\/1583"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/1275"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1201"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1201"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/phenomenologyblog.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1201"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}